[OOC:] Character critique

[creator_raven]

I've been playing Raven for a couple of days, so far, and I thought now might be a good time to get some feedback on his characterization. Mostly so I can nip any problems down before they get entrenched in who he is, for me.

I'd appreciate it if you could let me know how you think I'm doing.

Comments

[underwater-owl.livejournal.com]

Random; I only start crying because, as we all know, when an Amberite'ss hurt, their emotions are out of balance.

Steph; *grins at Lynne, and raises eyebrow a la Spock* Yeah right, hon. You're fooling no one.

[underwater-owl.livejournal.com]

And this, I'll have you know, is blatant Random-flirting. Which probably means that the rest of the world thinks he looks crazy. *Shrug*
I could have chosen a character with NORMAL human responses, but where'd the fun in that be?
*scowls at the grammar of that last sentence.*

[creator_raven]

*snickers at the flirting.* Puck tried such a thing, too. Raven's all--I have no biology.

Normal human responses are boring. I see them every day.

Hence Raven.

[creator_raven]

Lynne: *sobs*

Raven: *eyebrow*

[underwater-owl.livejournal.com]

I don't know if Random's figured that bit out yet.
Random's all 'emotionally damaged beyond all belief.' Though he tries desperately to be normal. He's really proud of himself for keeping a friend this long, actually.
And I have to start wrapping soon.

[creator_raven]

If he pushes a lot more, he'll probably figure it out fast.

Raven is particularly difficult to drive off.

Wrap is fine. Random is fun!

[underwater-owl.livejournal.com]

Oh, he's going to be absolutely sick with embarassment next time they meet. (He probably will use the ripping thing, though it most likely won't work. Complicated canon-magic envolving thick steel, powerful and very old magic)
So expect an even more damaged Random (possibly not so hot on the 'trusting' thing, either. Though it's not Ravens fault. And crying. Lots of crying.
I'm not intentionally evil to my pup. This does have a basis in canon (which is why I can't use the 'tear' thing.)

[creator_raven]

I figured. Just, I mean, Raven would so definitely offer, so I had to.

[underwater-owl.livejournal.com]

Oh, it's great that you did. Again with the 'Random having a friend' novelty thing. The only other person he talks to is Asmodean, who would probably laugh his ass off if Random came to him in tears.
Or just nod and offer to play a song.
I'll say goodnight now, and talk to you when I next get the chance!

[creator_raven]

Good night!